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Its one of the fastest evolving forms of technology and entertainment in the world. With the ability to be downloaded from the net, sold on a disk or even made in the home, video games have proven to be not only cutting-edge technology but very versatile at the same time. While video games are mainly for fun like many other forms of entertainment they require a lot of work to make and advance current technology.

This is a great start. I like the contrast that you are setting up; video games are not only for entertainment, but they are also responsible for advancing the world's technology. You have also written a great lead in. I would suggest that you work with the wording of the last sentence to make it a bit more precise.